Wow, Richard. What a fantastic lyric. Men arn't supposed to admit crying, right? Well, I am going to admit that after reading this lyric, a tear came to my eye (Then again, I cried when Old Yeller died). I am a sap though. This was truly tremendous. No suggestions or complaints here. This is perfect, as is. Lyrically, performance, music, recording ... all spot on. Congrats on a great one.

Dave