Tom,

I was reading through the other comments and was terribly curious as to what delight was in store for me when I clicked on your song to give it a listen. I certainly know what all the excitement is about. You are the man!

So, may I offer just a slight "nit" that may or may not be appropriate? I don't get the song. Go ahead, I'll wait for you to pick yourself up off the floor.

So let me be a little clearer. In the first verse you're warning me to not go near this lass. Then in the last verse I'm being stalked by her? Whaddya mean, I'll curse the day I didn't run like hell when I was the one engaging her in the first place. You see what I'm trying to say?

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~ terrill

“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.”
― Bob Marley

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