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Major rewrite of one of my oldies.
Where it All Began Copyright © 2003/2014 David Fontaine
He's played all the stages The Opry to Vegas Took country to far away shores He's been all these places Seen so many faces Spanned the globe, ten times or more
He’s come such a distance Torn screen doors and chitlins To cold crystal and five star hotels He ain’t gettin’ younger Can't explain all the wonder Why so many still love all his tales
Of back where it all began Back to that flat patch of land Where the crickets still sing lullabies to your dreams And the river and mem'ries run deep Where a man will come home anyway he can- I feel like here you are trying to say a man will always miss his home and wanna come back so perhaps it would be clearer to say where a man will GET home anyway he can...or make it home anyway he can, to me come home sounds like an easier feat. Back where it all began Now every note lingers In his wearied fingers When the spotlight goes down each show And every next morning Brings a painful new warning His ole’ heart, says it's near time to go
Back where it all began Back to that flat patch of land Where the crickets still sing lullabies to your dreams And the river and mem'ries run deep Where a man will come home anyway he can Back where it all began
The news, it just broke this morning Dropped to knees, right there where I stood I knew now dad would fin'ly come home The only way that he ever could.....
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Back where it all began Back to this flat patch of land Where the crickets still sing lullabies to our dreams And the river and mem'ries run deep Where a man will come home anyway he can Back where it all began
Where a man will come home anyway he can Back where it all began This is beautifully written--perhaps consider telling us why one would wanna come back home, are they tired of the road and if so, why? but then again I think everyone mostly misses something about their home and maybe they just relate to his songs for that reason and its a common feeling and not just his. Kimberly
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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