Originally Posted by David Fontaine
Hi Neil,

you would pick out what's been them most problematic line in the whole lyric! mad Haha! smile Well, when you're right you're right. I knew it, now I've got validation!

I knew this is what I wanted to say, because when I was a kid, I remember how the screens would get all baggy and torn, from us kids pushing on them to open the doors. I also want chitlins in there for down home reasons, lol. When you said it felt like the TORN almost carried over to the chitlins it was clear as mud! That was the problem, and I actually think I've solved it. Not only did I solve that I added a contrasting word for the next line! Two birds, one stone!

Again thanks buddy!

David

good change...carry on wink