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Hi Lisa, "I know why you still cry" is perfect. It's a chorus speaking to the elephant, telling him we understand his sorrow. I wonder if, for the last taggy chorus it could be a total reversal: (do) you know why we still cry, Rahu there are others like you Since the chorus is still engaging Rahu in conversation, in the taggy chorus, it's more direct to ask Rahu "(do)you know why" than to simply inform him "I know why" --and hope he's paying attention. "You know why" --close to your original line, there, sort of addresses him personally. My thoughts, anyway.  I love it..fantastic work! Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 05/29/15 11:44 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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