Hey Ricki

Thanks for your thoughts and endorsing the importance of those lines about conflict. They were important to the ending of that section before going back to the dying young man and his eventual spirit carried back home by the guardian angels to the soul of his girl.


Had he made it back home, the Guardian Angels would have fulfilled a different role and there would be a little broken but wiser, and not beaten hero, a wounded warrior of sorts, just not a dead one, to write about.

If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop