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I think you got a ray Montagne vibe here. I like it, I wonder if the structure could be changed to make it better.
" Cause if by chance".... That sounds like your refrain, but your placing it in front of what seems like verses.
I think it might prevent it from being really catchy.
I think that's a good melody, might work better as a verse chorus thing.
Nice to hear something raw here.
Good feel and vocals
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