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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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If songs didn't need structure, there were be no structure in songs.
I think he wrote here more than what he wanted to say, it's clearly conceived of and all the rhymes did not just come out.
The structure here is AAA, it wasn't chaotic or disorganized, the writer knew what he was doing. Generally the hook would come at end of the stanza, but I have seen it like this
I just think melodically to start with the best part of the song leaves you no where to go.
We shouldn't be critiquing the critiquer. Trying to up it even better
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 08/13/24 11:35 AM.
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