Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
I think you got a ray Montagne vibe here. I like it, I wonder if the structure could be changed to make it better.

" Cause if by chance".... That sounds like your refrain, but your placing it in front of what seems like verses.

I think it might prevent it from being really catchy.


I think that's a good melody, might work better as a verse chorus thing.

Nice to hear something raw here.

Good feel and vocals

Hey there Fdemetrio...........thanks for listening and commenting. As all my songs, I don't think too much on building a recognizable structure. The songs come out as they come out. And I love the fact that this structure is "odd". I didn't plan on that, and didn't even realize it was until you and a couple others pointed it out.
To me, it makes the song all the more unique.
Again, thanks for stopping by ;-)