John

Alternately, you could have stowed away, on the Alabama
and jumped out at Mobile Bay
Just in time to get caught in a Gulf Coast Hurricane
and a heavy Southern rain.

Sorry if my suggestions seem to be ill fitting and pendantic.
I've grown up and lived around the Gulf Coast region of the United States for my entire life, so I'm somewhat familiar with the navigability of the rivers and bays.

If I tried to write a song about Canadian geography, I'd be at a loss.

Overall, nice song.