Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
This is a nice song. Good job.

However, I listened to "The Devil Is In The Details," on SUNO, and imo-fwiw2u, that is an exceptional set of lyrics. Great job. You should post that.

I suggest trying some other persona on the vocal though. The gravel-ly voice is good, but some other voice might be just as good or better.

I thought the song was so good, that I broke my own rule not to post here between evaluations.
I don't knnow how you do your stuff these days. I assume that you have a robot advisory board for the lyrics.
Whatever and however you arrived at the devil-details song is working well for you.

SP


The Devil and details is a cliche , I'm sure its been done, probably wont cut the song . I use the same method on writing songs I have for 2 years now . I use AI as the cowriter

I'm not re-singing this , it fits the vibe on angry on being rich and poor and the bullshit of life .We all end up in a box dead , 4 million or 75 cents . You're broke cuz your dead . So you better live now rich or poor .. Retire to what your tomb of memories ? Oh talk about the weather and politics , Your vote matters and pigs wear pink underwear , oh boy , no thanks keep cutting songs . We're so rich in Nashville . Were saving prison Zoos .. That gorilla hates your guts humans .Why don't you name it dead animal walking ? You stupid humans . Thanks Marty

Last edited by bennash; 08/28/26 04:22 AM.
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