And a third for the IMO fasmily.
Talk about stating the obvious.
Probably the biggest one after that, in a lyric critique is, "I'd have to hear it with music."
Why?
Because I post lyrics to see if what the lyric itself is about is coming out, and presume that is number one priority for any writer in the first draft stages.
I use, it flows well a lot. It is my way of saying, either it sang along pretty good to me, and/or, the bits all worked together story wise. Logic was easily understood sort of thing.
Which bit I am refering to, is usually made clear, by my comments toward either changing words to either alter the tune, or the story line, to bring it into line with how it feels for me.
if I say "Go sing" It means I can't see anything I would bother altering pre noise try one.
Rarely does any bundle of words sing exactly as first written come sing time.
Graham



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