Exactly what do you expect ameture lyricist to say? Half of us don't know the exact words to some of the lyrical phrases and structure in a lyric ie.. meters, rhyme patterns, bookending, etc... so I have to ask what do you expect for people to do?
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One thing I like to do when I have time is copy thier lyrics.. insert my suggestions, isert what I like about a pariticular bar or line, and just go in depth with a song... but I do that only twice a day... one with a song I like and one with a song that needs it.

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Bo Parker
Writes2Passage
www.writes2passage.com
(I write the songs... You sing'em)


Bo Parker
Writes2Passage
http://www.writes2passage.com
(I write the songs... You sing'em)