Howdy Eric,

Dawg is all patted for the day. LOL I have to ration him, ya know! Otherwise he starts writing really badddd children's songs!!! [Linked Image]
Glad this one gave you some imagery. I was actually thinking that the guy was going off to fight WW2..so you weren't far off on the 50's music thing there. In my mind, that was the only way the timing thing worked well for her to be such an old woman today. I love some of that old Frankie Valli stuff too...so you won't get any complaints from me on that part. Such a distinctive voice! I love your picture of loyalty and strength...because that was precisely what I was going for here!! Yeah, I do have a head tune for that 5 line chorus, but things can always change there.

I was hoping for heartwarming here but not altogether predictable. Don't want this to feel overdone.

Thanks SO much for the read and comments here!

Bobbie


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