Howdy Tall One,

I wasn't stuck on the fingersnap thing, just looking for some image that was innovative for saying that we aren't around very long when compared to eternity...or something like that. Don't recall those lines from Dylan..but they are good ones IMO. Talk about a guy who saw things a bit differently. I will sure consider the linger line. Not bad, though it has connotations of hanging around a bit too long. [Linked Image] Do like the sadness/smiles line a lot. The wink/blink of an eye is what I was trying to avoid cause it is just too predictable IMO. Still thinking though..and I DO appreciate these nudges towards a new tack here.

Bobbie


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