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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2001
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Hi, Bobbie. Yup, this is a sweet one. I have to agree with Curtis, though, on the transition to that 3rd verse. I think it needs a line or something that shows his return before the wedding. That really threw me the first time I read this. I think the bridge still needs some work. I don't have an idea for you, but it's just not there yet, IMO. In V4, the "hill" line was a little confusing to me. My first thought was "what hill?!". It kind of came out of nowhere to me. Not a big deal, but I thought I'd mention it. Bottom line? I think this is really good. Just needs a little bit of smoothing out.
Erica
[This message has been edited by rickigirl (edited 03-26-2003).]
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