Under the weather here, but read this in the spirit of a good Christmas song. Frankly, I believe you've blown your entire hypothesis outta the water with these two lines.

"Fundamental Narrow Views
Love Their MYTH...as He Departs"

You're implying that he, too, is a Christian, but then you talk about "their myth". I have no doubt you'll somehow obfuscate. As you often do in lyrics of this ilk, you try to land on both sides of the fence, and I don't see that happening. And PLEASE don't take this as a condemnation of the one "who lives a lie", but I deem it just as worthy that one doesn't always have the homosexual as the whipped, downtrodden scape-goat. Truth be told, based on what little (and I do mean LITTLE) TV (sports and a few reality) I see, I'd swear that same sex relationships are as common as ....anything! "Great Race" ALWAYS has at least one COUPLE, and usually two (albeit, one with a son and his mom), so I don't think this kinda hysteria is anywhere near what it once was. JMO.
Structure, et al....good, as usual.
Ben