Hi Bobbie,

I think this could have commercial appeal. I don't even have anything I can pick on, except to me, a few extra syllables here and there. It appeals especially to me because I have an orange tabby named Gigi who wakes me every night I am home with a four paw massage on my back. She does this to remind me that I am not home often and when I am she needs attention. Kinda like a wife. Oops, slipped there for a min. Anyway, I like this lyric, and hope to hear it to music someday. Good luck with it.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

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