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Good Evening, Bobbie! I really can't find much to nit here. Having had the opportunity to meet Julia, and spending a few days around her, I can easily visualize this. And yes, she certainly does have a way of letting you know when she wants attention. The way she hung onto the window screen, looking almost as though she were being crucified, just cracked me up! I really do not know how commercial this might be. The target audience would, of course, be cat/animal lovers, and that crosses all genres of music and social demographies. I think this would a perfect song for some sort of TV show that focuses on pets, cats in particular. But, until the real identitfy of the bed partner being a cat is revealed, the lyrics are a bit suggestive of something a little more risque, so that might not work, either, because those animal shows tend tohave as lot of children watching them. Okay...call the Grammar Police for this unacceptably long sentence!  Although I like this one a lot, and kudos on the "suddenly'apparently" rhyming couplet, that was good one, I am not sure where the marketplace for this would be. with a little spit and polish, you just might have something going here. Best of luck with it! Alan PS: Helen says hello and sends her best, as well.
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