well actually fireflys tend to gather at the coming of a thunderstorm when your young they are protectors, when they catch you older they protect your heart and wisdom.What this is a switch back song from past to present like a switchback film where in all ends the imagery keeps you in the piece without sacrificing eyes of autumn brown. Autumn is life not just age and death, it is the creation of vibrant colors that warm the soul.
But thanks for the advice, I appreciate you stopping by to critique this and as the number one poster here I wiil try hard to limit my vocabulary but when it comes to the love of your wife well she deserves all my words.

Ken Randall