Hi Ken,

You're quite welcome. And thaks for the compliments. Anytime I see a song I like, I try to take the time to help. Some time I don't have the time, but I try. I have one more thought, if you can take it. I think the 3rd and 4th lines in the chorus should be reversed, with one word added for flow, see below. I think it's going to come out very well.

Everyone needs their Firefly to bring them in from the storm
Everyone needs their Firefly in the dark to keep them warm
I have found My Firefly, and her name is Rose
With the sparkle of natural beauty on the petals of her soul
Oh, I've been captured by a Firefly, my glistening Rose

You might also try;

"Everyone needs their Firefly to save them from the storm"

I think it flows better. Again keep 'em or can 'em. good luck with this one.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

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