Bobbie darlin'.....

It ain't a matter of retention. I didn't have any tact to start with.

I could not help but note that your chorus was the soul of brevity and still did not expand or compliment the verses. The rhyme scheme on you chorus seems a bit...well....terse to me.

Thanks for the read and the KIND WORDS.

dawg<G>


Wisdom does not always accompany age. Sometimes
age just shows up alone.