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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Hi Redvass,
Nice to meet you! What a beautiful lyric. Has me all choked up. You have a real nice voice. I think this has much potential. I would strongly suggest having this professionally demoed!!!!
One lyrically weak spot would be this verse:
I grew up and I went off to life,
Found a real nice job and found a real nice wife
But I always called home, just for remembering.
Possible suggestion:
Well I grew up and went on with life,
Found a real good job and the sweetest wife,
But I always called home, just for remembering.
Again, I would invest in a demo and then pitch away. This is worth the investment. This is very very good in both message and melody!!!!
Best,
Lynn
Last edited by Lynn Orloff; 09/12/07 10:10 PM.
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