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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Joined: Aug 2007
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I appreciate the feedback, Samuel. I added the bridge last because I felt like the verses should be broken up a bit, but do you think it is necessary to have it in there?
I've wrestled with the generations thing as well. I would really like to portray the grandpa with his grandsons somehow, but I know what you mean about it being a little confusing. I'll take some more time with it. Thanks for your time.
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