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Toxic
by Rob B. - 10/04/26 02:16 PM
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Afro Pop
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Afro Pop
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Gone
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Mara Cole
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Marlene and Tiffany.....I listened to this one the other day....there was something about the chorus that just didn't sit right for me....love the song....vocal very good...this is just my suggestion...not saying it's right but I would do the chorus a little different....I would do it...
She's out in Arizona
Waiting for him to come home
See he never was with her
And now he's just gone
She's got a long way to go it alone
She's got a long way to go it a...lone...
I'm not sure if the music would need a little change or not....you can s-can this altogether.....just my thoughts....
T-bob
It's something to consider, TBOB. Tiffany may have tried it like that. We changed the chorus a few times. I'll leave it up to her to consider your suggestion. Thanks for the listen.
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