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Hi Girls

This is such a pretty song and Tiffany you had me pinned to my chair with your delivery. Beautiful voice and emotional performance.
Marlene we talked about demos.. this is exactly what you need to do with your songs.
Did you guys collab on this more or less? Sounds like you did.

Marlene this is what i was talking about with the demos if you hand me a song at this stage I can take it over the top with the rest of the production.

Loved everything about it as a listener. If i were A&R or publisher looking to shop the song. I may only have suggested messing with the chorus melody/phrasing just a tiny bit. It's very good as is but maybe less gospel like at the end phrase and more pop.
Of course this only applies if shopping was involved.
And that great dip Tiffany does with her voice.. I would maybe save that and use it in one part of the song to make it more effective.. Like in the chorus only or not in the chorus but in that spot in all the verses.

Tiff a very BIG WELCOME here and I sure hope to be able to obtain the services of your wonderful voice in my online studio as well as my own songs.

Great work!