Hi STO,

Nice to meet you & welcome to JPF.

You got a lot going on in your song.
Although this is not my kind of music, I can appreciate what you've done here.

I see you got plenty of good advice already.
I also enjoyed these words....VERY COOL !
To look beyond the skin I'm in

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Have a good weekend.

Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart