KALEY WILLOW!!!!! Purple prose? I wouldn;t have thought it of you!!! <G>
I dunno , your story looks good to me. You've had some good help already. If you want to stay away from the touching thing you could just have Charlotte tell them to run up to her nest, it's empty now and I'll set on the branch above and stand guard . I'll drop you down sone nuts and things now and then till your Momma comes for you. ( I think GJ suggested something like that).
(If all that is necessary) May work ok as is unless a teacher brought up the touching thing
Wy