Pretty cool instrumentation. Right now the song (to my ears) has mixing issues. It seems that the vocals and another instrument (slide?) are sharing the same sonic space (left/right position) or EQ zone. Therefore the vocals are sort of covered up at times. I would try and move things around until the vocals are better isolated. Some background vox would help, too.

Kevin


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