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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Great "soundscape" you build on in the first minute and then "boom", it comes together at the chorus. ... and then it starts all over again. Really well produced and professional sounding song.
I think the lead vocals need more "brightness" and punch. I don't know how to do that (or how to explain it better), but right now I think the vocals might be a little hanging back too much. I don't know if that "breathy" approach in the verses is the best approach. However, if this song is finished, then forget what I said -- it's fine as is!
Kevin
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