Hi Jim,

This is well produced with great vocals, keys, drums, bass, whole package. There's no great hook; the major one, major two, major 4 thing in the chorus is something that's a bit overused, and the repetition of it makes for a little blandness, to me, where you want to blow me away--in the chorus...

...overall I'm a big fan of seventies kinda sounding stuff, and your " A " section is fun, " B " is okay, just I can see me getting tired off it, the production in the B is perfect though, and swells in all the appropriate places...

--Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)