I love it Jim. I don't really have any nits. I can't find any fault with the lyrics, music or vocals. Really nice job.

The only thing I can say, and I'm sure at this point it's not helpful, but I'll say it anyway... What you have labeled as 'solo' is a real cool part. In retrospect, I think the tune would have been stronger if you had used part of it after the 1st vs too and maybe even referenced it in the intro... it could have been a great instrumental hook for the piece.

Nevertheless really great job.

Peace,

Ian

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