Just a beautiful melody, plain and simple, Ricki! I was carried away from the very first note.

Lyrically, you've created something subtle and dramatic at the same time. I especially liked this section:

I thought more time would make me strong
There isn’t time enough to last that long
I was ready when the day had come
But not when day was done

Wonderful writing!

Greg

If you don't eat your meat, you can't have any pudding.