I still love this tune Ricki,

Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos

I want a light at the end of a very long tunnel and feel that this verse gives that.

To me, "latest desertion" implies you're going to stick around in this awful relationship. The "day was done" verse, to me, leans more toward really leaving.

Regardless, nice job.

Peace,

Ian

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