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Hey Ricki,

Better late than never, I suppose. The problem is, I'm running out of accolades for your songs!!

I suppose I could succumb and check out that Thesaurus.com business...but it simply comes down to you being a tremendous, intuituve and talented singer/songwriter. It's such a pleasure knowing that I will NEVER be disappointed with where you take us...I just open my ears, sit back and enjoy the ride.

With this lyric in particular, I enjoyed the fact that the scenario/players are left to the imagination of the listener. Regardless, these passages in particular are my favorites:

You were leaving and I could not go
I was crying but couldn’t let it show

and this whole verse is stellar:

I thought more time would make me strong
There isn’t time enough to last that long
I was ready when the day had come
But not when day was done

Truly, exceptional use of the different elements of time...

SO, yeah, I guess, this was a pretty good one too, Limey.

Thanks for sharing! I'm so glad I finally made the time to take a listen....

Ciao for now,
Beth