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Hey Joice and Calvin:
I really like this. It's a great hook delivered nicely and the melody is very cool.
I can get behind the lyric too - except for maybe one spot. "What matters are the things that didn't last". It's a great and original line but it seems at odds with the hope that the singer has that something will happen here - because if she wants it to matter than she would want to hope it didn't last.
I'm sure I'm over-thinking this - I know what you're really trying to get across there....and it doesn't seem to bother anyone else...
So I spent all this time talking about one line I'm not sure about. Everything else was fab for me!
Scott
Last edited by Scott Campbell; 05/20/09 08:21 PM.
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