Hi Joice & Calvin,

This is really nice! I like the whole feel of the song. The lyric is great....and I like the hook. If it helps to know, I did wonder what those things that didn't last were, when I initially read it, but I think I inferred what I thought the singer meant (moments) and didn't think much more about it.

I really like those harmonies in the chorus too!

Great job, you two! smile

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist