Hi Big Jim (PMd you)

Many thanks for the critique and your awerness to what is going on is spot on as usual. My only defense is that I wrote the song 12 years ago for a band that I was in and we had a female singer (she sang like a horny angel and was only 16 years old) and is completely in the wrong key for me. So,..... I recorded all the music in the key as in the lyrics attached at the top of the thread then transposed the audio files up two semitones (in Cubase) so I could sing it in the lower register although it was designed to be sang in the higher. I will put the original recording up on soundclick tomorrow so you can hear the massive difference and put a link on here. I agree that there is no real hook or big change in direction but my feeling was that there was no need in the original and maybe my over produced version did not convey the feel quite so well. Anyway, you can argue that point once I have put up the link.

Hi Babette
Hot chick is feeling much better ta, it seems that goats cheese was the problem. She has a sensitive stomach at the best of times and said cheese was a tad too much for her hence the huey and duey.

Very pleased you popped by and checked out my song, did you hear my other song called Lunatic? That was no reference to you I might add.

Warmest regards to all

Must go now as it's 9 minutes past 3 in the morning now in good ole blighty

Dude

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