Well, after taking advice from you fair folk I have spent a couple of hours on remixing and editing, here is what I have done.

Change Bass drum and enhanced bass drum level, changed snare and increased level.
Ran the bass guitar through a bass amp and cab model and now sits better in the mix.
Slightly lowered the solo volume.
Added more reverb to last guitar part.
Centered main vocal and slightly panned harmony vocal track with reduced volume for more subtle effect.
Reduced as many artifacts from the recordings as possible.
Removed one acoustic guitar part leaving two acoustic guitars panned hard right and left but they are subtle.

Then remixed the whole song for the best possible balance, to my ears anyway.

So there you are folks, give it another listen and let me know what you think even though I probably won't make any further changes.

Warmest regards to all

Dude

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