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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 05:03 AM
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Joined: Dec 2006
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Hey Mark,
Real dream time kind of song. It's all working Ok, especially like the lead, it screams. Hammond is squealing also. The vocal effect is Ok, but maybe just use it sparingly, perhaps just as a sign off, or alternate it line by line. I think the vocal line is either clipping, or popping, or both. Have you thought of replacing the snare patch ? It sounds a bit thin for the type of song. Big and boofy would compliment the arrangement, the kick also.
Small sidenote ; If you can clean up the the beginning and end by editing out the track on/off pops it will improve the overall delivery.
It's workin'. Tidy up the audio, and it's a cool track to listen to.
cheers, niteshift
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