I actually read the lyrics first and I thought that it read like a very good story. The music interpretation is very well done, too. No reason that this couldn't end up on an album somewhere.

Scott might be right on the song's structure, but it is still OK as is. Good job and collaboration. Hard to beat a mandolin, also.

Kevin


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