Well, Tom from all I've heard for quite a while from "industry types" --UN-obvious rhymes are very much to be preferred.
"Telegraphed" rhymes--rhymes where you can hear them coming, are frowned on and rhymes used a hundred thousand times.To a publisher, I think it comes off that the writer isn't "trying" very hard or else that they have a limited vocabulary
JMO
I'm sure you'll get plenty of responsese from people who know more about it
Wy
(Jean snuck her's in ahead of me <G>)

Last edited by Wyman Lloyd; 07/29/09 01:51 PM.