Hi Bill:

One thing you might be running into here is that people are going to react to this in many different ways, depending on their sense of humor.

I don't know that I thought it was funny but I thought it had humor and I would have got a kick out of it if I was Billy. My wife would have been shooting daggers at you though. smile

So it all depends. smile

I DO think you could make it work for a larger fraction of listeners if you take Joyboy's suggestion and put it in the first person.

Scott