HiDee T-Bro!

Overall, I like it...it's definitely unexpected Asian Sounds (When my ear's expecting more of a "High Noon" Vibe..considering the Plotline.) I didja a more "angry" re-write, lyrically, at Forum 3 in the wee-hours..use whatever works. (Methinks any guy who'd gun his wife down, for ANY reason, is basically a hothead & WOULDN'T be as-sorty-Contrite as Singer ends up here. In Reality, such a person's "Closure" would be when he ends the lives of the Cheaters, JMO.)

LIKE your Vocals...& Narrative Style...Works Wonderfully! Good Luck with this, Amigo..it's a Great Concept & Hook.

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan