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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Thank you Glynda. I Hope you feel better soon.
I have been working on it already a little. How about this for a first verse and chorus? better???
SHE SEES HIM
BUT CANT MOVE
PARALYZED BY WHAT HE'LL DO
SUDDENLY HER
OPEN EYES DON'T
SEE WHAT THEY WANT TO
SHES LOOKING FOR WHAT SHES DONE WRONG
IF SHE LEAVES HIM WHERE WILL SHE GO
I SEE FEAR IN HER BLACK EYES
OH AND IT HURTS ME INSIDE
CHORUS
AND I WISH YOU HAD IT MADE
NO MORE TEARS OR FEELING SHAME
SPREAD YOUR WINGS
SO YOU CAN FLY AWAY
AND NOT LOOK BACK
HE'S ALONE NOW
SAYS HE NEEDS YOU NOW
OH HOW I WISH...
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU
I WISH YOU WOULD LEAVE HIM
I WISH YOU COULD TELL HIM
WHAT HE NEEDS TO HEAR
Probably still needs some work but I am feeling it's a bit better.
Ricky
Last edited by Ricky Layne; 05/03/11 11:19 AM.
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