Welcome fellow Oregonian from Eugene!

You're trying to tell a difficult emotional story that needs to be told. I was married to a 30 year hurricane. My husband died in August, and I married my best friend and have such a life now, like I could have never imagined. That's a long story that I'm not ready to publicly tell yet.

When you get to know me, you'll learn that when something reaches out and grabs me, I tend to give you my my take on your song. Doesn't mean I think my way is right, I only post to give you another way of looking at it, keep or toss any of my comments, and good luck with your song!

I would like to see the title be along the lines of " I wish you had it made", again, personal preference.

V1
That look in his eye
Says guard every move
Watch you say watch what you do

Don't stop to stare
Your sences are aware
Yet you're so afaid to prove it

Lift
What did you do wrong, where will you go
How will you live, looking over your shoulder

Ch
I wish you had it made
Had means to fly away
Never looking back
Though tears no shame
You're not ready now
Still need him somehow
Knowing.. he'll never change
I wish you had it made..

V2 ?

Repeat chorus

Bridge
There is no regret
Livin' on borrowed time
This mental suiside
Means you still have your life..

Repeat ch

Tag
Nothing will change
He'll remain the same
Girl youv'e gotta get away




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GENEVA Griffin

Lyrics seeking singer/composer,cowriters,collaborators