Originally Posted by Dottie
Hi Scott,

I think it's a cool song! I wonder if the title might be a tad stronger as "Ain't that SO cool.

I agree with Ian that the 3rd and 4th verse aren't as strong as the first 2 verses but they're not bad. smile If I can think of any ideas I'll come back to this.

Dottie


Hi Dottie:

That's a good idea on "so" instead of "just". Thanks!

Scott