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Diverge
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Hi Bikini Babe,
I like the beachy feel of your lyric and it has a lot of rhythm. The only thing I would add would be naming the beach. To make it be more personal. Hi Jackie, First welcome to JPF. I look forward to seeing your work. Thank you for the valuable suggestions, and I believe that naming a well known beach would help the lyrics. How about, all the white sandy beaches of the Gulf Coast. Jimmy Buffet gives concerts there a lot at Orange Beach..The sand looks like Sugar..Also the great beaches of Panama City, Fl. It is famous for all of the spring-breaks..Beautiful, area.. Bikini Babe, Fran Williams
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