Hi Ben,

I enjoyed this. It's well written with the three stories within the story, and the rhyming pattern is really cool. I'm a fan of soft rhymes and think it makes it fun to hear them sung! Good playing and singing too!

Kristi


A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist