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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Scotty, Great demo of your song. It kind of grows on me as I listened. I'm not a big fan of these pre-chorus or lifts. I think you could just go from the verses directly into the chorus. I'd also rewrite the melody of the first line of the chorus to slide more smoothly into the last three lines (and I LOVE last three those melody lines). Something seems off about that first melody line. Maybe its an unusual chord that doesn't fit to my ear. (Now I sign this same card every year). Or maybe it's just me. If nobody else notices it, I could very well be wrong.
You've done a good job on this. Congratulations.
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